SHANNY’S POV “Saang bayan ka nagmula?” napatingin ako kay Heya Rion na nangunguna sa paglalakad. Naka
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Paulin Elcano
the flow of the story is good. in every scene, you can't say that it is cliche because it's not. the story is very unique and, I know for sure, in the next chapters it will be more surprising. xoxo.
the flow of the story is good. in every scene, you can't say that it is cliche because it's not. the story is very unique and, I know for sure, in the next chapters it will be more surprising. xoxo.
15/02/2022
5the story is good and unique, i like it...
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