I born In one beautiful day of May..full of sunlight and good weather..but the doctor complained about I didn't cry like usually newborn ..I was like a white bear big and I looked serious face..maybe this it's the reason why all my life till now it's full of tears and I lost anyone around..bcs I didn't cry the day I born ..
Wow, that story was truly captivating! I couldn't stop reading until the very end. The way you described the characters and the setting was so vivid, it felt like I was right there with them. The plot twists were unexpected and kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for sharing this incredible story!
13/08/2023
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GirayJesus
keep writing more...this story make me so curious about everything look so real more more more
16/01/2022
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RosdiIrfan
the story so sad and not bad to read them also I enjoy the story
16/01/2022
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Joemar Ace Sindatoc
thank u for sharing us this best story..I really enjoy to read this..And I feel like Im the main character because I feel what story happened and also the suffering happen in this story.
14/01/2022
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Jemer Smith
the best novel the best to read cause this story is so related to other people.
14/01/2022
2
Stephanie DazIrene
Really like it! Even though English is not my first language, this is not hard to understand bcs it's simple English and the character is so much relatable to some readers today. Gonna give it 5 stars! Keep writing author.
13/01/2022
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Ety Lopez
interesting storytelling..hopefully the writer can produce a great story like this again ..
tq( ˘ ³˘)♥
12/01/2022
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Marguerite Marcus
this story same as my real life story 😃..just a lil bit different .I hope you got more views and liked... because this story is so amazing 🤩
10/01/2022
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aisyahSiti
the Stories is good but Sad Tho Thank you for your hard work making this
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Mylena Adornes Correia
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บทที่ 1 19 January 1991
I was born in one poor family but honest and very hard worker parents my parents working both every
บทที่ 2 what happened??
it was August 1996 when our mom wake up my brother to send our goat outside to eat beside the river
บทที่ 3 start to grow up and my first job
the silhouette start to approach more beside me and I started to hear his heavy breath but the smell
บทที่ 4 tired and weak?
the morning come so late ...that 4 hours remaining from last night was so long...I was smoking and w
บทที่ 5 the prove passed successfully
before I get down in the car I took my ring also I feeling comfortable and I was believing that brin
บทที่ 6 after the joy of that day
I was getting drunk after the meeting and I ask kime to go out...I wanted to go home to sleep and a
บทที่ 7 DARK MOMENTS
when I open my eyes ..there has no light my head was covered by a black mask ..no possible to see ar
บทที่ 8 numbness
I sit into the small sofa and I was waiting for KIME .And I was remembering that I experienced..ever
บทที่ 9 the simple life sometimes makes sense and give you brothers
I started to cry without voice and I walk away ..I had little money in my pocket and I stopped one
บทที่ 10 A big day for US?
that it's was like a dream for mili ..to have a bed and to be useful for the people around he was t
บทที่ 11 brother by blood
I let them drink and I just sit in the terrace outside smoking my red Cooper 100s.while I heard some
บทที่ 12 MY FIRST DEAL
somewhere in midnight in the day on Christmas eve I had to travel for going Italy..was my first time
บทที่ 13 My first lost ...
we had to finish the work left four month ago by one of our guy who had been in prison with first co
บทที่ 14 the revenge
we go in our safe place ..in that unknown city we decided to recover our powers and I need to inform
บทที่ 15 a cold day
November 1999 ..I was in my bed and I heard the alarm clock sounds. I wake up lazy and my body was
บทที่ 16 the puzzle part one
after the revenge for LILI who died while covering my body ..my life and my heart still was not calm
บทที่ 17 the puzzle part 2
I wake up late from the calls in my mobile ..fifty-five messages from Tina and twenty-four calls she
บทที่ 18 puzzle 3
the game become so interesting and after 3 days in the chain with mild tortures and the fear Niku fe
บทที่ 19 final of the puzzle
I removed my jacket and I approach to the chair of Niku I didn't speak any word just I saw him shaki
บทที่ 20 continued..
I let Mili to take charge of Niku ..and I was right he rent one apartment few minutes from my house
บทที่ 21 memories or needs?
It very cold weather and outside everything was frozen ..while hanging in the window I saw a small g
บทที่ 22 Inva ..my heart needed to open somehow.
part one
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all the way going to the village up she keep watching me and observing what I was doing ...she looks
บทที่ 23 still in my confession...
the night was so short and maybe I sleep only sixty-five minutes...I wake up from the smoke grandpa
บทที่ 24 after the tough situation.. MONDAY
after the dinner ...Inva make coffee for us ..and we sit in the terrace ..the view was so beautifu
บทที่ 25 SULEYMAN...
I enter the office without knocking and I saw ....what a girl uo the table of Kime and him cuddling
บทที่ 26 preparation going on...
with Tani we meet early morning he bring many maps around the world and ask me to choose...kime beco
บทที่ 27 some flirt and happiness around
I remembered the store of sports good was 24hours open and I drop by there ..TANI looked at me when
บทที่ 28 first day of travel failed ...
the morning come so fast I was taking a nap in the terrace and I wake up from the voice of Tani... HE
บทที่ 29 MILA HOUSE ..AND MY SURGERY
I remember she put me in one large tub for washing clothes and I heard fixing the horse for pulling
บทที่ 30 Accidentally...my angel come for help
I wake up numb few hours later and I was shaking and cold sweats covering me all over ...my head bre
บทที่ 31 Leaving Mila house
next morning I ask Inva if she can transport me...I needed to go in my house and to take a good trea
บทที่ 32 time for recovery
we started to travel and Tani was driving I ask one cigarette from him and while I was smoking I was
บทที่ 33 happiness moments
the place I choose BOOMING was full populated they day because was weekend ...we stop and the manag
บทที่ 34 happiness not yet over
we wake up early and I asked Inva plans for tomorrow bcs the weekend almost gone and maybe she neede
บทที่ 35 I thought I can changed his world...I was wrong
we stayed long hugging each other and Inva was flowing in her tears ..I grab her shoulder and we bot
บทที่ 36 Inva needed our help
father of Inva was confined in the public hospital...his heart become weak and almost surrender this
บทที่ 37 Mili will come with us
Inva was nowhere when we left the hospital I just send a message in her mobile to call me anytime an
บทที่ 38 Turkey
we started early morning with ferry boat ...and we reach there exactly in time the doctor asked ..I
บทที่ 39 investigation going on
Inva become surprised by the people here and the friendly manner the show to her ...the old albanian
บทที่ 40 Father of Inva it's safe now
we make rounds that area almost four days and we get many notes and new location we also discover on
บทที่ 41 Kime dissappear
next day ..I call Kime about the new updates we had in turkey and how we are advancing with our plan
บทที่ 42 a tough situation
23:05 the clock and black Mercedes Benz blinded show up near the place I was waiting...the car stop
บทที่ 43 numb situation
i heard all of them go out from that big room and after i lost my feelings...few minutes later i fee
บทที่ 44 our escape
after we hug each other I told kime to not move from the place ... YOU JUST STAY HERE I WILL TRY TO F
บทที่ 45 atleast kime it's free
the sun come out slowly bringing light rain also ...the 4 men go away from my place and I decided t
บทที่ 46 AGONY DONE ...
we go out from that place and I told to the old man we will go in the center of the city ...if someo
บทที่ 47 last day with my lovely
after one week and three days under the survey of the doctors they transferred me in the military ho
บทที่ 48 may 5 /1999
the morning was so crowded in my room..INVA in one corner holding my new pants and a new black shirt
Wow, that story was truly captivating! I couldn't stop reading until the very end. The way you described the characters and the setting was so vivid, it felt like I was right there with them. The plot twists were unexpected and kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for sharing this incredible story!
13/08/2023
2keep writing more...this story make me so curious about everything look so real more more more
16/01/2022
1the story so sad and not bad to read them also I enjoy the story
16/01/2022
4thank u for sharing us this best story..I really enjoy to read this..And I feel like Im the main character because I feel what story happened and also the suffering happen in this story.
14/01/2022
1the best novel the best to read cause this story is so related to other people.
14/01/2022
2Really like it! Even though English is not my first language, this is not hard to understand bcs it's simple English and the character is so much relatable to some readers today. Gonna give it 5 stars! Keep writing author.
13/01/2022
4interesting storytelling..hopefully the writer can produce a great story like this again .. tq( ˘ ³˘)♥
12/01/2022
2this story same as my real life story 😃..just a lil bit different .I hope you got more views and liked... because this story is so amazing 🤩
10/01/2022
17the Stories is good but Sad Tho Thank you for your hard work making this
08/01/2022
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