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• Detalyadong
• Mataas na paaralan
• Teenficiton

Ano ang tingin mo sa mundo? For Draft Perez, a Grade 10 student, the world is a hateful place, wala kang ibang maaasahan kung hindi ang sarili mo, no one you can trust and no one to confide with. Lahat ng ngiti ay peke at walang laman. You can only rely on yourself for comfort, safety, and happiness. Ito ang nag tulak sa kaniya para magalit sa mundo as a whole and that's when things took a turn. Will his life end on a happily ever after or will it take the other way around. Walang makakapag sabi, because in every perfect picture of a story there is always an underlying tragedy.

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  Stephanie Marie Cavan

  nice story

  07/04

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  AtonMark Lennon Villareal

  Good Story

  11/11

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  DucutNicole

  beautiful

  07/11

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  Oliver Ronquillo

  oliverronquillo

  07/10

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  GaRhonel

  good

  16/07

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  Kinney

  this is a good storyyy! but i just wondering if imagination lang ni draft si analie or sinabihan sila ni analie na kalimutan siya????

  28/06

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  Edward Singson

  good

  19/05

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  Delossantos R. Nery

  it's very good

  11/04/2025

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  Lucas Aethan DC Castillo

  so beatiful

  24/03/2025

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  Lacerda de SouzaThiago

  👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😀😀😀😀😀😀

  12/01/2025

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• ทั้งหมด: 42

• Chapter 1

  This world sucks.
  The whole concept of living, work hard, study, graduate, earn money, it just sucks

• Chapter 2

  “Babae guys”, Gale cried.
  I took a peak but everyone is already looking at the back of the room.
  White

• Chapter 3

  Two weeks into hell, I mean school.
  As promised hindi na ako na late, muntik muntikan lang naman. Sam

• Chapter 4

  The sunlight peered its way through the curtains. That, together with the ringing of my alarm clock

• Chapter 5

  Canteen, where else would you go for lunch at school.
  The canteen itself is integrated into the scho

• Chapter 6

  The unzipping of my bag echoed around the room like a loud fart.
  “Meron”, I said before pulling a pur

• Chapter 7

  Going home? More like I wandered around with nowhere to go and my mind is blank.
  I never knew that t

• Chapter 8

  Mag aalas dyes na ng may kumatok sa pinto ng kuwarto ko. I was having trouble solving my Mathematics

• Chapter 9

  No matter how much your preparation is, when the storm arrives the rain pours. It’s the truth.
  Ako an

• Chapter 10

  “Will you be my friend?”
  Where did that come from? I’m not so sure. I racked my brain out since yeste

• Chapter 11

  Have I sold my soul to the devil? I feel like I did. Yun nga lang sa isang palaging naka ngiti at me

• Chapter 12

  Standing behind me blending in the shadows, it has a devilish smile. A closer examination and he is

• Proof Read 4

  “Congrats sa ating first grading honor students”, masayang bungad ni ma’am pagpasok ng room. She was

• Proof Read 5

  “Kanselado na ang pasok, hanggang bukas”
  Malaking sulat ni maam sa black board. Medyo madilim pero na

• Proof Read 6

  What to do on a free day? Madali lang, gumising ng tanghali, mag cellphone, at kapag nalowbatt na tu

• Proof Read 7

  Nagising nalang ako sa malamig na sahig ng kuwarto ni papa. My alarm clock on my room is again screa

• Proof Read 8

  Intramurals, panahon para ipakita ang iyong athletism at physical abilities. Unfortunately, ang kata

• Proof Read 9

  “Assemble na daw para sa awarding ceremony, puro ka tulala diyan nabobobo ka na, tanga tanga”, Brian

• There's Something Wrong

  Rosmin Nature Hub Resort, located in Macalang specifically on Sitio Magunao. Madaming beach resort s

• Revisions 1

  “Alam mo ba yung sa movies? Yung kapag may nalulunod eh may pasigaw pa at pakawag kawag sa tubig?”,

• Revisions 2

  “Pa pwede ka bang makausap?”
  With the words of Luna echoing at the back of my mind “confront him”, I

• Revisions 3

  And there goes the ship, sinking*
  The asshole demon teased as I found myself under the bridge. I reme

• Revisions 4

  Monday came like a dreadful hangover, especially sa taong hindi naman talaga natulog noong Linggo. U

• Revisions 5

  You’re too fucking kind. Pero sigurado ka bang hindi na siya makikialam?*
  It stared at Luna before fo

• Reviewer's Opinion Part 1

  It’s nice to be back sa probinsya, ang ingay din kasi sa Manila, matraffic, pahirapan sa sasakyan, a

• Reviewer's Opinion Part 2

  “Draft!”, bulyaw ko sa kaniya.
  That day is unique, hindi dahil pinauwi kami habang bumabagyo but it’s

• Revisions 6

  I’m still debating kung tama ba yung desisyon kong hindi tumalon, bakit ba ko nagpapauto sa babaeng

• Revisions 7

  Hinang hina na ako ng makarating sa kanila, feeling ko hihiwalay na yung kaluluwa ko sa katawan ko.

• Revisions 8

  Akala ko pare pareho lang ang washing machine, not until nakita ko tong washing machine at dryer ng

• Revisions 9

  Hindi ko alam kung paano ba ako hihiga at matutulog, kagaya nga ng sabi ko, hindi ako sanay matulog

• Editing 1

  Punta tayo dun, punta tayo dito, kain tayo dun, try natin yun. Ano ba, pagod na pagod na ako kalalak

• Editing 2

  We just stared at each other for a good minute, her eyes are a bit hesitant while I just waited for

• Editing 3

  “Anong ginagawa mo dito?”, the devil stepped inside habang papalayo naman ako. He tried to reach for

• Reviewer's Opinion Part 3

  Christmas, panahon dapat ito kung saan nagkakapatawaran ang lahat, it is the time where everyone is

• Editing 4

  “Hindi po Uncle, hindi ko pa po siya nakikita o nakausap, tsaka nasa Baguio po kasi kami nila mama a

• Reviewer's Opinion Part 4

  “Nakita ko dito yung nawawala mong alaga Luna, kausapin mo nalang kapag nakauwi na sila a day from n

• Editing 5

  “DRAFT!”, bungad ni John as I walked pass the campus gate later than the flag ceremony.
  Nag palate ta

• Editing 6

  Kanino bang idea mag fieldtrip dito, sa city pa talaga. Napaka init, napaka ingay, ang dami pang tao

• Editing 7

  “Draft? Ayus ka lang?”, a simple pat from the back brought my attention to Luna.
  “Hindi ko alam, what

• Reviewer's Opinion Part 5

  Parang umiikot ang langit at magalaw ang lupa. I was feeling nauseous as I examined my surroundings,

• Editing 8

  It was vague pero I guess naramdaman ko pa ang pagdaloy ng kuryente sa katawan ko after I said my go

• Final Draft

  You need to value your time in this world, and likewise ganun din dapat para sa mga taong importante