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VillamorAngelo
i love the story that i read .... i was amazed to read every details and the frequency of what happened to the story ... the characters everything was good... i hope i could read more of your books...
29/12/2021
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ellieysian
Constructive Criticism
The plot twist of the story is kind of "hiding and chasing." I love the character development, especially that of the male lead. Typographical errors seems normal, but a lot of words were misspelled. Some of the lines are difficult to read because of the ungrammatical. Moreover, there is a lot to improve, which can fully let the reader grasp the message and understand the flow of the story.
Anyway, Congratulations for writing the Unforgettable Night!
29/12/2021
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LozadaCecile
Author Thnkyou your Story Is One of the best.. More Story to write pls.. I'm waiting and i want to read your next Story .. Happy New year Author Godbless You
i love the story that i read .... i was amazed to read every details and the frequency of what happened to the story ... the characters everything was good... i hope i could read more of your books...
29/12/2021
1Constructive Criticism The plot twist of the story is kind of "hiding and chasing." I love the character development, especially that of the male lead. Typographical errors seems normal, but a lot of words were misspelled. Some of the lines are difficult to read because of the ungrammatical. Moreover, there is a lot to improve, which can fully let the reader grasp the message and understand the flow of the story. Anyway, Congratulations for writing the Unforgettable Night!
29/12/2021
1Author Thnkyou your Story Is One of the best.. More Story to write pls.. I'm waiting and i want to read your next Story .. Happy New year Author Godbless You
26/12/2021
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