Ayunda lived the days of pregnancy quietly without any disturbance from anyone. It doesn't feel like
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BoubakriAhmedboubakri
nice
26/04
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Jheicel De Juan
I can't really understand some of the sentence sometimes when it comes the wife being called a brother and him that shouldn't use for a woman, also calling the characters many nicknames is kinda complicated because i need to read the next words to identify who's talking and being talked about.
it's just my feedback for the story so the author will have the idea what should be improve the words, sentences, paragraphs of the story,
but the story have a good plot i liked it☺️
nice
26/04
0I can't really understand some of the sentence sometimes when it comes the wife being called a brother and him that shouldn't use for a woman, also calling the characters many nicknames is kinda complicated because i need to read the next words to identify who's talking and being talked about. it's just my feedback for the story so the author will have the idea what should be improve the words, sentences, paragraphs of the story, but the story have a good plot i liked it☺️
23/02
0it's been good story
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